The fact is

The fact is... love is real.

The fact is that I love you,

 the fact is that my heart can't seem to let you go.

 It's like a growing storm slowly turning into a hurricane.

The fact that I want you close can't stop the distance that's between us. 

The fact is your never far away. 

Please always know that this is true, that I would fly a million miles just to see you're smile. 

The fact it's... I love you endlessly. 

The fact is that I'm dreaming,

 and even when everyone tells me stop believing, 

I will never stop dreaming.

Author's Note

Hey guys!! I know i haven't posted in a while, I'm so sorry. I hope you read this and that you know you are loved and that there is someone thinking of you. Share your heart in all you do and smile cause you never know the lives you can change and the broken hearts you can help heal. Xoxo thank you for reading!!

Reviews

[Glen Yumang Manese]

The point of view is open and present through out the read..yet I believe this can be said with less words and instill within the audience...the repeating quote --- "The fact is" gives more than the definitive lines of this verse...just impo...I have read you other works...just that part of the scheme of things hinders this a bit while I read...Thanks for the invite...

[Rosaria_V]

Ahh thanks so much

[Glen Yumang Manese]

You're welcome...you've been gone for a while...doing my best to come in and out of the WC...and review the flood of RR's...busy with copywriter/editor work...and the book: The Onyx ~ Vena Amoris...the moment of truth is near...advertisement and readers has been good...need to kick it in high gear come November and December...glad the book can be out by the holidays...please pass the word out for me...word of mouth is the best ad campaign...welcome back...

[Rosaria_V]

Yes i know. Thank you and best of luck on everything :)

[Prritiy]

sweet poem of love, liked it. let everyone say otherwise just be in love :)

best wishes

[Rosaria_V]

Thanks so much

[Prritiy]

you are welcome

[kublakhan27]

I think we've all wanted to write a poem like this at some point in our lives. There always seems to be one person that takes our breath away and gives birth to the feelings you've relayed here. It seems like we all have "one that got away." A lot of heart and great poetry in this piece my friend :)

[Rosaria_V]

Truly means so, much thank you!!

[Frieda P]

Beautiful dreamer, the magic of love, sweet poem indeed.

[Rosaria_V]

Wow thank you stop much

[annabellee]

Very good and sweet write. I also loved the picture you used.
"The fact is that I'm dreaming,
and even when everyone tells me stop believing,
I will never stop dreaming."
That's an important message, you reminded me to never stop.
Well done :)

[Rosaria_V]

Awwwww thank you so much

[annabellee]

you're most welcome :)

[MsJewel]

From one dreamer to another.. good for you...don't ever stop dreaming.

:) Julie

[Rosaria_V]

Thank you beautiful

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That was beautiful I wrote 1 myself that regret now:( But your poem was very beautiful Rose:)

[Rosaria_V]

Why would you regret it?

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Cause it was childish thinking Rose!

[Rosaria_V]

Never childish thinking to dream or hope.

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Idk anymore Rose, I just know I should have never gave into my feelings and wrote this poem.

[icelandicblue]

Dream your dreams for perchance they will come true. A very sweet poem Rosaria.

[Rosaria_V]

Thank you very much xoxo

[Trace]

very nice and inspirational statement.
It would have read nice if in a form of poetry,
break up the sentences into verses so it reads more like a free verse.

[Rosaria_V]

Your so right. I wrote and posted so quick i didn't think about it

[Rosaria_V]

I just fixed it and hope you enjoy it so much better :) thank you!

[larryb]

Never give up your hopes and dreams Rosie...very good write :)

[Rosaria_V]

I won't, i promise. Thank you very much.