simply cause

Hey all!! I'm so sorry that its taken me so long to post anything new here. Thank you all for the lovely comments and words of support. I do still of course write all of the time. I have much to share

Don't be decieved by what you can't see.
Simply cause the moon has eclipsed,
doesn't mean mean there's no moon light.
Just because there's no sun,
that there the light has vanished.
Simply casuse you're not here,
Doesn't mean I don't think about you.
Looks can be as deceiving as the moon and sun.

Author's Note

Thank you for residing. Don't be deceived by a hidden heart because you're loved too.

Reviews

[Mustafa]

a very romantic and meaningful poem,congrats

[Saddam]

Its beautiful and meaningful write........

[Rosaria_V]

Thank you very much!

[Malcolmveli]

Nice and simple. This poem to me conveys the point that life isn't all visual. And in the case of the moon it can be "more than half of what you see." Nice work

[Rosaria_V]

That means a lot, thank you so much!

[Malcolmveli]

You're Welcome . Thank You

[Mayank]

Very well written, things existence. If not here, somewhere else. Not physically, but internally.

[Rosaria_V]

You're too sweet, thank you! :-)

[Coyote Poetry]

I liked the poem. I like the way you compared life and the moon and the sun. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Rosaria_V]

Hey!!!! And thank you very much!! :-)

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

Sweet poem from the heart. I especially liked the imagery of the sun and the moon as eternal reminders that the one who we cant with at the moment is still with us.

[Rosaria_V]

thank you so much!