Annie

A glimpse into a mothers love

Shes got ribbons in her hair,

Shes got sparkles in her eyes,

shes picking all the flowers,

Now shes looking at the sky

 

Running through the grass,

Dancing free like a child,

Never caring that shes being wild,

Her face portays a bright bright smile

 

Sun shining in the sky looking down upon the field

It almost seems the world cant help but cast a smile

Opening itself to this small little child

Her arms spread out reaching to the sky

As if it to catch the beauty that all around her lies

 

 

Author's Note

Something I wrote on our daily walk

Reviews

[Your Tasty Field Adviso..]

it's really good, just wodering on the rhyme scheem. in places there seems to be some and in others there isnt. nothing really bad with that, because of the fact that poetry doesnt have to rhyme, but it would be better if it was more consistant with th rhyme. either rhyme or dont. now, i can't say much because of the fact that i sometimes just through words together and like how they go together, therefore i make it a poem. :D lol. it is a very good poem none the less.

[Jacquelene Vanessa More..]

this is so sweet. it's when we feel like little girls sometimes huh. i feel like this when i go for my walks but so many words are going through my mind i can't focus. i really love the simplicity of this and i can invison it . the innocence is what i love best. when the world is seen through rose colored glasses. very sweet

[Evil_Angel]

Really gorgeous piece of writing. It makes me miss being a kid and not having a care in the world. I don't know about the "dancing free like a child" if she already is a child? Either way it was lovely good job. :)

[RHEA CROSLEY]

Very encouraging it is nice to picture the innocent freedom of a child.

[MelyG.]

its beautiful...fresh and crisp. Reminds m e of my children on a beautiful day..so innocent enjoying every moment of it. nice write as always...nothing else expected.