Eden

I asked him how much he loved me,

he said, "more than life itself."

I told him it was easy to die,

he replied, "I love you to the point

of creation--

if you did not exist,

I would have no choice but to

become God."

And to that I had nothing

to say.

Reviews

[John the Baptist]

I think anyone would be hard put to come up with a reply to that statement. If one could push another to become One Without A Second, that's pretty heavy duty love.

[Serendipity Planet]

Beautiful and Romantic
That's what real love sound like

[Delmar Cooper]

The places we go when there is no place to go. Poetry and madness.

[Coyote Poetry]

Oh dear Anna. I liked the twist of words. The questions and the answers. Both perfect. Thank you dear poet for sharing the amazing and interesting poem. I did like the poetry.
Coyote