FAKE FRAUD AND LIAR

You think that you know someone then think again....

It makes no sense really
the words just kind of
float around my head
Time has forgotten
yesterdays sorrows.
My eyes gaze upwards
with hate.
You broke my heart into
tiny ragged pieces
You walk about our house
if nothing has happened
What planet are you on
Mars or something
I have had just about
enough of you to
last me a life time
You know what quickly
just leave don't ever come back....
Why don't you say something.?
explain
Who do you think are.
leading me up the garden path
You are a big fraudster
Fake and a liar
For I am hurting real bad
inside ..........

Reviews

[TL Boehm]

What planet are you on
Mars or something - that line just jumped out at me. I think similar things at times when dealing with those closest to me. Well penned.

[Mary]

raw bleeding emotions must happen before any healing can begin. You poem represents the beginning of that process- many many many people will relate personally to this.

[Danielle]

Very nice honest raw emotion here, you speak your heart. Nice job.

[ROSALIND]

Marie Smith just read this and boy the pain and anger jumps off the page great write when i feel better i will go on the site and perhaps put some of my work on
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[ROSALIND]

Elizabeth Olesen Rosalind, I am very sorry for my response. I think I was so quick to impose my own way of dealing with sorrows. Of course, you have the full freedom to express the great storm you are going through. And I do symphatize very much. Thanks for sharing this. Denmark 1/12/2013 7:10:08 AM

[ROSALIND]

Elizabeth Olesen Dear Rosalind, I am really very sad to read this kind of poem. I have read a number of your very good poems, but this one is something that makes me very unhappy. I am sorry. It is because I have read you as one with a very loving heart and I think hating should not cover your loving heart. I know we can be angry and can be sad. We can use our poems to help us to be delivered from these strong emotions, almost choking us. But to have a poem to be occupied with hate is really sad. Denmark 1/11/2013 6:21:05 PM

[ROSALIND]

ale Costello I think it is brave to talk about the emotions most of us try to deny ourselves. We all experience anger in our lives, it is better to address that than hide from it I believe. well done.

[Sheila Kline]

Oh such pain dear one!! Your heart must be completely broken!! May you heal and be whole again!!

[ROSALIND]

Probably not one of my most inspiring pieces, but i got a lot of anger out and i am feeling better for it.....Laugh out loud

[Adam Whitworth]

the writing isn't good, does 'having something to say' make up for that?? well, I don't think so- if you've got something to say just say it, POETRY is more than that. That's just my opinion. Anyway, if its cathartic for you more power to your elbow :)