AT WAR WITH THE BEDROOM TAX......

Gr the unfair bedroom tax
Mr Cameron you just haven't
got a clue.
You won't have to go without.
Nope, If you need to buy
some much needed shoes
You're have the cash in your
bank. Its not Likely that you
will ever suffer.
Why don't you step out of
your secure hole.
And just live off very little
money.?
You wouldn't last  a month
would you Mr Prime Minster.
It is the most proprietress thing
you ever enforced.

Its going to cause unnecessary
suffering to the people in the UK.
Don't you even care.?
Did you even ask God?
if you were right.!!
I hope You come to your
senses before it is to late.
You said that you would
change the country
But we ask you to have
a change of heart.
Please will you reconsider
and drop this mad bedroom tax... 
 

Reviews

[Iam-me]

Well said Rosalind. just came across your poem. The rich take more and more and every day the poor suffer and struggle. And the working class. Just hang on and no more.

[TL Boehm]

I googled the "bedroom tax" and how unfair to tax a soul on the basis of a spare room if I am understanding this correctly. I can feel your frustration in this poem. Well done.

[ROSALIND]

Mauricio Montoya
Mauricio Montoya

strong message it has left me to ponder.
Thank you for sharing

Posted 3 Days Ago

[Marie]

Roslind, I don't understand what a bedroom tax is.

[eglantine]

same... the font changes, not sure if accident or on purpose.

[Marie]

I've seen this happen in her writing before. It has never happened to me.

[Garry Maan]

The message you have tried to give through this seriously make it worth writing.

[Garry Maan]

even I had to search for the meaning of bedroom tax.. but I understood it . great concept .. keep writing:-)