Romantica

               
Romance only breathes
loves unfulfilled desire

The blood of my pen
     

Reviews

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

I love it Beautiful.


ones that love it can be unfulfilling and
to others it isn't but this was beautifully said.


you paint a story with few lines and seems you used
your pen that is to be red pain of choice.




BRAVO take a bow.




Blessings. kindred poet

[Lyn Anderson]

A great piece, with a lot to say in little words, just like I like.

[Rossen]

Thank you, talking cat. Most of my rhymes are based on a rhyming cat with a stripe-e hat.

[Lyn Anderson]

ha. Oh, and since I am a card carrying member of the Apostrophe Police, I must say, that perhaps you might want to put an apostrophe in love's -- but maybe you like it sans apostrophe.

[Rossen]

loves does look so necked and bare,going on three years now.Can I bribe you with catnip
and a belly rub? to look the other way,you have a cop's mu stash for sure....

[Pryde Foltz]

Pretty rocking senryu, great story and imagery.

[Rossen]

much blood split tonight tween you and I...

[Pryde Foltz]

Yes, I suppose, that is true.

[Ruth]

Full circle, potent and down right hit! xx

[An owl on the moon]

It is a certain magic what the perfect words in perfect order can project into the mind... Sensually subtle...

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

Powerful use of very few words simply amazing

100/100

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

Beautiful Rossen- love your title .. and the three lines , beautifully said..

Chloe

[M.Babu]

To reciprocate with the brevity in your words:

"Magnificently done!"

~M.Babu~

[Winslow Des Totes]

The first lines brings me into a fantasy whilst the second and last tell the tale of a poet. Very beautiful!