Where Have I Gone?

That moment you realize you don't recognise the reflection in the mirror

So far, so far away
Just one step everyday
Obvious the signs of my decay
Til I've become my own castaway

Where have I gone?
Where could I be?
Iniquity has no dawn
Inability of this gloom to flee

Reviews

[Krutika]

Yeah it happens when we take time to reflect upon the life lived.. Time seems to slip quickly.. having no idea of our position in our time line.. But this is always the case after all our planet is a kind of suspended there in space.. it's journey to be documented with no idea about where it began or where is it gonna end..
I liked the way you describe the vulnerability of that moment😊👍

[EcstaticEuphoria]

Thank you Krutika! I really appreciate the review, you always have great insight

[Writing Angel]

I love this... I like the passion of wanting to be free it is inspiration....great work

[B]

I guess all humans go through periods of distance that must happen
For reasons beyond our vary own understanding
After all its a matter of humility to recognize the mind's limits .....

Bravo
Inspired many thoughts for me

[EcstaticEuphoria]

So glad it touched you. I think we each go through our own metamorphosis throughout our lives, nice that we all share that bond. Thanks for commenting!