At Last

Expectation, temptation... Desire

Held close this desire to believe

Depth of this emotion wide 

Time bound youth naive

Words unspoken, could no longer hide 

These glances... grins do sneak 

A smile, questioning 

My structure masterless, weak 

Left my breath heavy, trembling

Brow elevated in seeming reply 

Your presence, foreign

Every last flaw justified 

In mystery of you, adoring 

A whisper of the task 

How do I let go?

My lines in your illumination did bask 

The glory of giving you control... at last 

 

Reviews

[T0TS]

Wow, I'm becoming a fan of your poetry...again, you flow, your words just dance off the page...awesome stuff here.

[EcstaticEuphoria]

Thank you so much!! Appreciate your encouragement and reviews😁

[T0TS]

You are most welcome, Rosalee. :)

[Ankit Miglani]

Couldn't get enough of it. The depth of these lines is really wide, speaks to everyone in it's own way. Glad to read your choiced words . Thanks !

[EcstaticEuphoria]

Thank you so much for your review and encouragement! I appreciate your insight!

[Writing Angel]

wow... so entrancing I loved this especially the lat line..wow good job

[EcstaticEuphoria]

Thank you! All the positive energy and comments are very heart felt and appreciated!