black and white

everything goes by so fast

everything is so colorless

everyone around me has an emptiness

I feel so usless and hopless

 

everything is black

everything is grey

everything is white

 

will I ever return to that day?

 

do I deserve another chance?

 

or am forever lost in this world of colorless and motionless picture

 

Reviews

[smalltownsympathies]

I love the color-usage idea you have going here, but expand your boundaries. Don't go for the most obvious words, or phrases. Expand your horizons, fight through emotions you wish you'd never see again, then close your eyes and clench your pen (or in this case, keys atop the keyboard) tightly. You've got this. You're fantastic, and have such potential.
All the best :)

[Alicante lullaby]

i agree with sympathies..nicecolour usage...it gives such a decadent image...also lovely pictures...