Captivating

For eternity...and longer.

I want to be the seed and the fruit

your cross pollination,

a hummingbird

the turmeric in your mustard

 

at least the lines

on the leave

my rosemary

 

where I shall write

some words between

eternally green

eternally captivating

 

anointed with the blue

of lavender

sky of the heaven

squeezed

 

out of two rainbows

I want to live in you.

 

© Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere

Reviews

[NeiL ArandA]

Wow ... what a grandeur description . The herbs and spices permeating . The tumeric and rosemary . Don't we all dream that sometimes . We want to have both of best world . Two rainbows ? That is an exceptional wish and request . I can see the depth of your imagination here Rudi . Expressing it through surroundings and nature .

[Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere]

What can I say to such loving words, thank you so much, Neil. Glad you liked it. :) Rudi

[mattavelli]

This one has a lot of passion! It feels good to be a part of someone else's life.

[Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere]

Thank you, Matt, for passing by and reading my poem. :) Rudi

[R Smith]

beautiful colours and poetry here Rudi, with spice and herbs in the mix its a veritable feast of love, bravo :)

[Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere]

Thank you, Richard. Glad you loved this poem of mine. :) Rudi

[emmajoy]

'I want to live in you.'

Whilst a few words aren't quite correct, your intended beauty and meaning is laid so very well.

Your English is a billion times better than either my Dutch or Belgian... congratulations!

Welcome to the Cafe.

[Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere]

Thank you Emmajoy for the welcome and the review, glad you enjoyed it.

[Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere]

Is it possible you could tell me what words aren't correct? It's always good to have constructive criticism.

[emmajoy]

Though certainly not an expert will be glad to help. However, really MUST do some work now; will contact you later.

[Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere]

Okay, thanks.

[Geo Lawrence]

Rich words....
nice romance

[Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere]

Thank you. Glad you enjoyed it.

[Geo Lawrence]

welcome...keep up the good work