Watching The Stars

For Abbie

The high felt

In my chest

Is better than nirvana

 

Time stops

When I place my hand

In your hair

And run it through

 

It makes me euphoric

 

I've picked out

Every thorn in a

Rose garden

So we can sleep

In that heaven

While watching the stars

 

Then I'll look into

Your eyes

 

And that moment

Will be enough

To make me weep

Reviews

[Candle in the wind]

And that moment

Will be enough

To make me weep....That is such a beautiful way to express the inexplicable joy that brings tears of fulfillment.

[*~Poetic_Essence~*]

I love this one..i love the title and how it ties back into the poem in the middle..

"I've picked out
Every thorn in a
Rose garden
So we can sleep
In that heaven
While watching the stars"

[Que]

Well done, I love the link of roses with heaven and the sacrafice of picking the thorns.

~Que

[papaed]

Abbie sounds very special. Your love is well expressed. Your emotions come through in this piece very well.

Thanks for sharing with us.
papaed