Random Screening (Orange Summer part 1)

Seeing someone who is pretty

Her face sticks out like a bleeding eye
As alluring as a thousand roses
Her hair is like a black waterfall
Falling off a river of ambiguity
The frown is so inviting
It reminds me of a mirror
Reflecting truth

Author's Note

First piece in a series of poems I'm writing

Reviews

[Legion]

We see ourselves in others. Great work. What do mean by the Orange Summer in the title?

[BJC]

'Her hair is like a black waterfall
Falling off a river of ambiguity'

Man, if you only knew how close to the truth these lines were.

I would have been happy to send these words to her.