Darkness

There are people who fear darkness. Well the imagination of the human mind can be bizarre. I for one, like darkness. On normal days, yes the fear of the unknown does knock on the door.

On the days when I'm down and feel exhausted an the inner demons knock from within, I take them to the darkness, where no one can see me at my worst. No one can judge me. It is only my demons and I, in the dark. Darkness is like a platform to communicate without caring about anything. I don't have to care about how my eyes look after hours of crying. I don't have to care about my scars. I don't have to look at anything that I hide about myself for darkness is my escape.
 

Author's Note

Again I don't know what type this is, just posting my work for some constructive criticism.I would've used the bold, italics etc but my phone isn't supporting it.

Reviews

[Sarah Cristobal]

Hey Rusk, thanks for sharing! I personally can relate to this having suffered years and years of depression.

As critique goes, what you have here is good, but it could be expanded. Tell me perhaps how the fear of the unknown looks. Tell me more about how darkness is a platform to communicate (my favorite line by the way). Expand if you can.

Hope this helps!
Sarah

[Rusk]

Hey Sarah, thank you for the review. It absolutely does help. I will try expaning my other works :)