Are you serious?

Are you serious?

A Poem by RustyMind
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Well are you?

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I just don't understand
I can't see the girl I love
Because of work?
You won't even be there to see her
Half of the time

Are you serious?
You'll barely get time to see her
She'll be alone with just a couple of
Siblings
And now I don't get to see her
Unless you're there?

Are you serious?
This is bullshit it makes me mad
I have to be away from her
Because you think you'll fail
Maybe if you'd trust me I wouldn't
Put myself down

Are you serious?
There'll be a time when I'm needed
And I won't be there
For one second I'll actually feel good
Because I can say how does it feel?

© 2017 RustyMind


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Some things in life you'll never understand. People are stupid, and do stupid things. Like keeping you away from "her"
Whoever she is, she seems like a lucky girl to have someone who cares like this.
Seems like a truthful write, with lots of anger. Keep writing.

Posted 8 Years Ago



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Added on August 10, 2017
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