Vulnerable

The vulnerability of love

What is love?
If you were to ask me.
It's the most POTENT
and expensive drug.
I HAVE NEVER seen
ANYTHING else make someone
do the s**t that they do,
for any other reason,
like love does.
I say expensive because
the more pure the love is, the bigger the risk.
If your souls dance together,
When your hearts melt
and intertwine
while you're kissing deeply
while gazing into each others' eyes
With your legs wrapped together...
a love like that has a wicked withdrawal.
When you feel like your heart could cause the second big bang, and the next moment it could all stop.
Freeze.
I'll say this much.
You're worth the risk.
Because you're too pure to turn down.

Reviews

[Danny Metcalfe]

Really nice ending! Very mature in its nature.
Who can turn down pure love? Only those afraid of the light.

[RutabagaMac]

I strive to stay eloquently spoken and be very detailed, as if you can see and feel the words. Thank you very much. I think I'm all right for my age.