My addiction

Shes a keeper

Makes me want to dive into her arms deeper

Her smell sweeter than any flower

Her eyes i get lost in, stronger than any power

Her body shaped to perfection

Her heart is my connection

I can't live without her loving hug

She's my addiction, better than any drug

Reviews

[Muse]

Sweet addiction..could not have penned it better myself. Sapphire words, they make me want to shop and splurge...

[MOON]

Lovely write , nice flow indeed we all addicts of note.

[Christina May Shanaberg]

Love can become an addiction, if we let it. However, I prefer to be addicted to myself, first. When we give all of our love to someone, we forget to keep some for ourselves. That being said, I loved your concise poem of the feeling of being addicted to someone!

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Oh wow this is awesome, love the rhyme scheme.

[John Jackson (El Juero)]

Beautiful ode. I have that addiction, too!

[Melissa Edmunds]

This is really good.. thanks for sharing

[Rene Velez]

the power of love...endearing indeed, nice write.

[Nicky Wilson]

Very nice I enjoyed it a lot and I loved your description. This is cute :) well done good job !!

[Cassiopia Summers]

This is adorable and absolutely darling! Great love write, definitely a great piece to add into your collections here!

[Inyourshadow]

Love the last 2 lines hugs truly can be addictive, love is the opiate of the masses.
You pen your emotions with such brevity, keep em' coming