I Feel

It's kinda short, but I put a lot of work into it...

Night after night I dream of you

Though my dreams never come true

I pray to a God I feel nonexistent

Yet you still seem distant

I feel like you don't care

It really doesn't seem fair

My emotions are real

Everything you say I feel

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Jazzy]

Nice rhyming, although it doesn't really flow very well.
Try to make the number of syllables of the rhyming lines almost match up

[Peach]

Aw