All I See

Today I came across the most beautiful sight, 

a snow covered forest where day became night. 

This scene seemed to stretch for hours on end, 

after miles of forest it came to a bend. 

A small clearing was visible just down the way, 

had you been there with me right there we would stay. 

Before I knew it all I could see, 

was a magnificent lake staring back at me. 

Relentlessly the snow still fell all around, 

becoming one with the water while covering the ground. 

I stood for a moment just like the trees, 

after another I came to my knees. 

I thought to myself what a beautiful view, 

second in the world only to you.

Reviews

[M.J.Grace]

love!! =)

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

This was beautiful! The last line was romantic and my favorite!

I thouht to myself what a beautiful veiw,
second in the world only to you.

LOVELY

[patricia]

I Read all three of your poems. The other two were good, but for me this was the best. I liked several of the lines in it...becoming one with the water while covering the ground, and I stood for a moment just like the trees...Really good.
Thankyou

[Ashley ✎]

I love how you rhymed it ;)

[Sunni Davis]

Beautiful and moving, this touched something inside me. I love the imagery and the flow. You're very talented and I hope to read more of your work.