Untitled Short #1

2004

 

Gracious and giving,

yet the cost of living

can tarnish such a name.

This world's evils

leave minds so feeble,

angry at such a game.

The noble die

for a coward's lies,

we shall do the same..

Reviews

[alesuriko]

Insightful. Compact and intuitive with a good rhyme and rhythm. I really liked the commentary of this piece. Well done!

[Wombat.]

Loved it.

"The noble die
for a coward's lies,
we shall do the same.."

So, so, very true.