SIMPLY WATER

2 SHORT POEMS

 

Swirling Relief

 

Quietly watching

the many generous gliding

ripples of water, flow

across a rocky bedded,

clear stream,

constant and shallow,

as this continuum

of relentless,

intricate gushes

slither a thousand

minuscule

hushes

....

 

 

Manic Waves

 

north sea breaker

  pounds the shore

an overcast of

greyish-blue haze

hovers across

 the fierce storm,

scouring it’s

forceful will

over winter’s

drenched door,

as the bed beneath

the chaotic sea

tears away

seaweed,

erratically....

casting them as

lifeless,

piles of debris.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Riley]

It's like two pieces, or movements, in one poem.
The first half I found extremely affective and I enjoyed it greatly.

I also enjoyed the second half, too. Conjuct the Swirling Relief, Manic Waves moodiness and turmoil is all the more.

An arty and intelligent work.

[SHEEMA HUQ]

great to hear from you Riley, and such an encouraging review, thank you, see you soon

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Two poems that make one great point... Nature has a soft side and fierce side just like us... and they both have their purpose. Profound work.

[SHEEMA HUQ]

thanks so much for your complimentary review, I am really chuffed

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

My pleasure.