Night Time

Inspired by the nature... A simple description of the night.

The canvas is painted black

with dazzling diamonds embedded

and the orb of night spreading its radiance.

Gentle breeze blow, 

making the tree shadows move 

in a mysterious way.

 

Man snoring in his warm bed 

recharging for the next day;

unaware of the nocturnal creatures 

slowly opening their eyes.

For them 'daytime' has just begun.

Wandering here and there,

they look curiously at the concrete forest

every night a new 'tree' is found added.

 

As the moon slowly paces the sky

man enters a different world

where he can be a kid again

or swim in the chocolate river,

or fly in the sky 

or be the king of a terrain.

The canvas now slowly changes its color;

gold beams break the dawn.

Night lovers sneak back to their dens

waiting for the next nightfall.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Jess]

BEAUTIFUL IMAGERY. It paints a vivid image. Great job!

[Anusha Pokharel]

WOW this is an amazing poem, You described about dreams of sleeping so nicely! Good Job :)

[Shubhangi]

Thanks Anusha!

[W R Stowe]

Very good So descriptive of the boarder between night and day,explaining dreams of the sleeping quite unique l think you did a fine job

[Shubhangi]

Glad you liked it... Thank you!

[W R Stowe]

your welcome