The Fear in Her Voice

Just a short little poem about love and fears.

When the fear comes to her voice
my heart leaps to defend

When I hear the sorrow there
I know I must come in

I would do anything
to wipe away her tears

I would stop the world
if it meant to stop the fears

Reviews

[raining]

climb up and over the transome of life...ha, like this, you are hopeful she will see over the transomes of all life, you want so much to feel her feel. but it will possibly take her to understand her and own her feelings about where she is.

i like the two line stanzas and the way they work to break the mind-words into three places which you use to arrive at the finished poem. thanks raining.