Home

Home

That's where I'll be

Changing things

preparing for the next chapter.

Home is where it'll start

I may not stay long

but things will change

beginning with my room

I'm moving on from all the princesses

becoming me

finding what I like

not worrying about what you think.

Starting another new chapter

And I'm starting it when I get home

for good.

Until that chapter ends

and a another one begins.

But for now This chapter starts

At Home

Reviews

[lorennn]

you did great! I like it.

[Tempeste Mavys]

This one is probably one of my favorites by you, I like how sincere it is. Good job!

[Sunny]

Thank you!

[yuki]

Nicely done and well said

[Sunny]

Thanks! :)

[Britney S. Lewis]

This is good stuff.
I also really like the theme you've got going here. Nothing is as good as home feels, you know?

[Sunny]

Thank you!

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Life is an endless story we continually write everyday. One of the best chapters is the one of us coming of age. Nice work.

[Sunny]

Thank you! I appreciate you taking the time to read it! :-)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

You are so very welcome.

[Matching Socks]

Sunny, it's been so great to read such wonderful writing from someone young.
This is a beautiful poem, and I'm so glad you have a good home. Seems you have your head screwed on the right way. :). Good job.

[Sunny]

Haha that made me laugh! Thank you!

[Matching Socks]

You're welcome. :)

[Pryde Foltz]

I can't help but agree with momzilla below. Your home must be a wonderful place to have instilled so much strength in you. Great write, Sunny.

[Sunny]

Thank you!

[MomzillaNC]

Yours must be a happy home. I'm picturing sun-lit rooms and laughter and love and wonderful smells wafting from the kitchen.

[Sunny]

Pretty close actually! My room has both North and East facing windows so I do get a good amount of sun-light at certain times. I was mostly writing about me re-painting my room, and moving on from all the childish colors. it's been the same colors for a long time now. lol

[MomzillaNC]

Remember, you need to move on, but it's going to be hard on your folks to watch their little girl recede to memory.

[Sunny]

I'll keep that in mind, it was really my moms idea though :)

[MomzillaNC]

LOL -- just because it was her idea doesn't mean she's not going to have a spell of "Where did my baby girl go?"

[Sunny]

lol! That's true!