Sleeping with destiny

Your eyes are killer Your lips pour venom.......... I sleep with my destiny.

Reviews

[Pushkar Prabhat]

well this is good!!!
short and effective.........
:)

[Poetic Beauty]

This sounds like someone who has a deep amount of self-loathing and thinks they deserved the miserable situation is their destiny.

[Coyote Poetry]

Good description gave life to the artwork. Some venom leave us weak and wanting. Nice ending to the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Lydia Shutter]

You say so much in just a few lines. So often we are drawn to a person's looks even when we know they might not be so nice on the inside. "Sleeping with the enemy" as it were. Is the artwork yours too? It is lovely. Good work here. Lydi**

[Sami Khalil]

This was sooo good. I like it alot...:)................