Human Face

Take me off from color

Give me freedom from race,

Remove my religion tag

Let me see my human face.

Reviews

[Poppie Mira]

We all return from dust, in essence we are equal. I love the imaginary of this poem.

[Mauricio Montoya]

all these things seem to fall in place................Nice work.

[Kuhr Gred]

:) GREAT WRITE!! it really capture me when you said in your 4 line! :) keep it up

[André-J-Franklin]

Loved it but because of ignorant people will never changer until it's a life threaten scenario....Hope it never an alien invasion because the only race that would matter is human.

[Kori Fitch]

Excellent- well done. I am living in a foreign country...and the color lines do fall, and I am so grateful. I currently live with a South African(African descent) and a African-German...and it is beautiful. I am surrounded by Arabs that are beautiful - mostly young women...it is an amazing world of diversity and to embrace it is to finally reach the highest human potential...different tribes...thats all we are...thanks for your post...sorry for my comments as they are not totally focused on reviewing your words!!!

[joshua deathdealer]

Brilliant.. absolutely brilliant. I love it. *claps*

[Poetic Beauty]

The last line is dominant and strong. It makes us think about how we are all tagged in society by some rule or stereotype.

[Raven Starhawk]

Genius. I think people often throw tags at others just for the sake of labels. I don't know if I make sense, but I do understand this poem.

[The White Wolf]

As we all are, underneath the labels...well said, my friend.

[Kaa Na Kalyanasundaram]

Great lines. This will give colourful humanity rose to everybody. My regards friend.