I am aching

I am aching is a poem describing the true nature of the things that had happened when the Chinese occupied my country Tibet.

The day died out with a dusk
And we were drown into darkness
Ashes here and aches there
With bloody bodies all around
She was shocked and choked
With guns and gases
He died in a dreadful death
With a sudden blow of a bomb
And torn him into tiny pieces
Half of his hand over his head
His left leg at his right side
Was more of a log than leg
Which left unowned
in the mid of dead bodies ,
Blood here and bodies there
With screaming and striking
Killing here and dying there
We were the victims of a war
With a wound without single scar
As the day danced with a dawn
I was dead in a dreadful dream.
Sonsnow

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Reviews

[yuhee]

To be able to write a poem about such event.. astounding.. really astounding

[Sonsnow]

Thank you for spending sometime on reading my writing,,,,,,