RIVER

A Poem by STAR CHILD

RIVER

River ever so beautiful

Running down stream

Oh how it sparkles

Wonders can be found

But some rivers are brown

So deadly

Trash floats in it

With impunity

Oh such a tragedy

Allen Hollandsworth

"8/22/11

© 2011 STAR CHILD

Author's Note

Did for school time
Second grade word

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Vinod Kumar U K

Important message to the present....

Posted 14 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Stella

Wonderful poem! I liked how the beginning shows us the beauty of rivers while the second part shows us the violent and dangerous side.

Posted 14 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Marie Harrison

I like the contrasts
of rivers in this poem.

Posted 14 Years Ago

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Added on August 23, 2011
Last Updated on August 23, 2011

Author

STAR CHILD

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I love to write poetry i do many kinds of poetry but mostly i like taking people to magical places i mostly write about dragons and fairies i enjoy writting for children more..