FORWORD

FORWORD

From enchanted lands they come

Oh so magical

Riders of the wind

Wondrous they are

Overhead dragons in flight

Riding the dragons

Delighting in this place

Divine is this place

Fairies oh so wonderful

Ride the wind

Oh so grand

Oh so divine

Ride dragons oh so high

Wonders so glorious

Allen Hollandsworth

�"10/27/11

Reviews

[Jacques]

this poem didn't really make me want to carry on reading . like i said in my other review - i feel , my personal opinion that your recycling and re-using your whole fantasy elements like the dragons , fairies allsorts and every poem is going to start becoming monotonous , i'm gonna be frank - there already getting alittle repititve for me . i feel like you use the same words in most of your poems like Enchanting and i think you should open your mind and use some other words or write them in a different context . there's some other words which if you write right , you can make them belong into a fantasy .

[Daytonight]

I like the line : Riders of the wind.
Keep on penning!

[Margarette]

This poem makes me relax and feel calm. Great poem!

[Sleepless]

me gusta :) este poema es construido muy bonito ! me encanta ! sigue escribiendo !:)
( google translate if you dont understand it:P)

[LadyKarissa]

Nice poem Allen. Lucie

[registeredisaster]

don't fall off. good job.

[Larry Dyson]

I so love dragons.

[Shane Blackheart]

This is a very magical poem, but I feel you're using the same themes a bit too much. It's always good to vary your writing. There are so many different subjects out there in the world of fantasy to experiment with. You are good with fantasy poems, you should try to reach out a bit more and experiment with other things. Other than that, keep on writing :)

[KAREN]

Nice job, I like riding with the dragons into an unknown land!