Beloved Missing

I lost my wife last year. I have times that are difficult yet most of the time I am ok.

Lost in the twilight zone I can not find you.
Images flash by but you are gone.
I long to hear from you,
only silence comes from the wall.
Even God is almost silent yet I am to broken of heart to hear soft spiritual interludes.
Where are you my beloved one?
I know and yet I don't.
Why can't I find you?
I grasp and cry through the veil of dark ;yet ,you are gone and silence is in your place
It shatters my soul like so much broken glass upon the floor.
where , where, where have you gone? and why don't you reach to me from your hidden realm?

Yes I know, Yes I percieve its not time.Yet my soul cries and longs for your sweet voice.

 

Copyright 01/16/2008 Rhea Crosley

Reviews

[angelinmypocket]

She is reaching to you Rhea...every time you think of her. This sweet and emotional prayer to an unseen essence was surely heard by Him. He knows how full of pain your heart is for your missing beloved. Surely He will grant you the peace you seek when you realize the knowledge that she is in good hands. I wish you peace of mind.
Love/Liz/angelinmypocket

[Mr. Lopez]

The circles that we spin in this weave of life can dizzy even the strongest hearts. I see reflections of deep longing dancing with the will to hold fast your faith. All along eyes glued to the horizon , in search for what is rightfully yours yet has not been found. This is a deep and loving piece that gives your readers a great sense of the depth of your lonely heart. Truly beautiful.

Mr.Lopez

[Blue Sky]

Rhea, this is a very heart touching piece
emotions expressed touches the heart and soul of another
as your heart is left to mourn for your soul mate!
It's a personal one of yours that really that reaches out
in words, in tears as your heart cries out!

Even God is almost silent yet I am to broken of heart to hear soft spiritual interludes

You've written a very emotional piece one that is special and from your heart!