First Flight of Love

Dancing around the Fragile Leaves

I look forward to this sacred dance

Music flairing, love in the air

Old and Ancient is our romance.

Watch as she spins

Watch as he twirls

Two different worlds combining

In moments of Thrills.

"Come, my love," she shouts

As their hands touch

Such a simple spark

The world seem to hush.

Watching them race

Off into the night

Reminds all

Of their first Flight.

Reviews

[Regan Meade]

a very well written poem :)

[LeslieNR]

Lullying means putting gently to sleep sissy. Like "the waves of the shore sang deeply to me as I moved in and out of consciousness.." it is a word of loving, gently moving, and drawing down

Lullying, very pretty word

[-_Josh's Monala_-]

This poem is amazing :) i love it sis, good job and keep it up :)
Love ya ^.^
Meega