new rules, new flow

july 5, 2013

going by the old rules, going in the beaten flow,
i see nothing but my life will blow,
blow with ten tons of anger and frustration,
blow into a sad death as an implication.

going by the old rules, going in the beaten flow,
in poetry, in literature i will be slow,
nothing will happen but i will be lost in imitation,
what i write will not be a great literary addition.

so i am going to write new rules, walk a new flow,
and in the sky what i write and what i live will glow.

-lokesh

Reviews

[MandaBear]

This free style is cool. I liked it very much. Writing is very much a no rule place as long as it comes from the heart is all good. =)

[Coyote Poetry]

I like to write free-style. I use different ways to make me write. Best rules for writing. Is no rules. Be fearless and in control. Good luck on the new flow. I look forward to the new words. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote