The Reasons

A sequel to 'Betrayed'.

I don't know the reasons
Why you took those decisions
To abandon your lover
And be a bride of a broker

Is it because I earn less
And lead a life of mess?
Or it because your parents don't see me as a good partner?
Or is it because you are a user?

Whatever the reasons may be
Please tell me
I don't want to be heartbroken again
I don't want my second love to be in vain

Reviews

[Suditi]

It hurts to not be loved back by the person we love. But it hurts even more, to now know why.
Your poem is so straightforward and honest.
Its simplicity and innocence makes it even more beautiful.
Good job.

[Coyote Poetry]

A very powerful poem. Some questions answered could make us wiser and allow us to understand. I like the story in the poem and the request for reason for separation. A strong ending to a outstanding poem.
Coyote

[rachylou]

A very good and emotinal poem which people may be ble to rellate to. :)

[MandaBear]

Very emotional poem i liked it good job:)