Make Way!

When Fall hits the pavement--and running,
We're in for an autumn quite stunning.
The deciduous trees
Will bring us to our knees,
Then I pick up my piece and go gunning!

Author's Note

I dithered a long time between line 5 and "While the men will enjoy their fall gunning!" and I finally went for the radical. I call myself a raving pacifist and would never "go gunning".

Reviews

[Paul Bell]

Like your little ditty. Though i would change lines 4 and 5. to make it go faster.
When Fall hits the pavement--and running,
We're in for an autumn quite stunning.
The deciduous trees.
Will bend our knees.,
But I'll pick up my piece and go gunning!

[Sharon Miller Bolander]

Halloween and hunting season are quite the match. As long as the hunters aren't out with the treat-or-treaters, the kids are safe. Good one! Sharon

[Des]

Oh, I like short poems! This is definitely a favourite.