Shocked

Shocked

A Poem by Sad Unc Days 3562
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Surprises meant positively, meanspiritedly, and with an intended outcome.

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Shocking
An action with an intended large outcome
A call.
To change, to see, to hear, to do.

Freezing water        | Jarring
Often unpleasant     | Draws away from happy path
Disturbance             | Perturbance
Will cause change    | I am angry now
I wasn't expecting it | I didn't want it
A virtual 'hit'

But don't you see?
We live in an aquarium.
If you shock me, we might all end up shocked

© 2026 Sad Unc Days 3562


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Added on January 3, 2026
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Sad Unc Days 3562
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