RSI

Pinched from the side
a slight, niggling discomfort
but must move, must change
why? it's only a little.
pain blooms up and down all the way
stop
It won't leave even so.
Well, I told you to stop early

Reviews

[Michael Sun Bear]

As someone who lives with a high degree of chronic pain, I read this little poem as literal not metaphor. I also read your brief profile and my answer is yes.

[Betty Hermelee]

I think this could be interpreted in more than one way...my take is it's very sensual..."pain blooms up and down all the way"...."it won't leave even so".....nice metaphors..."well I told you to stop early"
Nice!
Warmly, B