A STRANGE SPRING

At the time I was sat under a huge tree

Its top was quite close the heaven

And its bunches, caught the clouds

Under it's around arms-

There were dreaming spring season.

 

The couples were talking

The couple of birds were singing.

 

Snow were scatter into near pond

Its charming buds, like stars

And old flowers coming on earth as autumn

Every couple enjoy this time.

 

All around of that tree was not beauty

Everywhere was desert

The earth was shining and blowing dust.

Reviews

[Lyndy]

Beautiful poem with beautiful pictures!. ;) I love it! :D

[Deepika]

I liked the message..Don't blame the situations/ environment for your condition, but be a sole fighter and change your destiny.

[Saddam]

Thank you dear. You got it well.

[brezybaby3]

It is very good. I like it.

[Sami Khalil]

"All around of that tree was not beauty
Everywhere was desert
The earth was shining and blowing dust."

[Vanesa Markovic]

Ethereal imagery, very beautiful work!
-VM

[Penny]

This poem is kinda unique.. the poem you have juxtaposed beauty with barrenness. Very well done.

[Julie Spade]

O.O so much symbolism and meaning to each sentence and stanza

[Saddam]

thanks dear, your comment is very lovely and encouraged me to do good. thank you.

[star73]

Love it I love reading everyone's poems it means so many different things. Good job

[Saddam]

thanks a lot dear....i'm glad.

[MsJewel]

Great imagery my friend. Another lovely poem, beautifully presented.

:) Julie

[Saddam]

thank you... your feedback encourage me always. thanks for this dear. love you.

[Tina Louise UK]

What beautiful imagery you have captured...lovely to read :) x

[Saddam]

thanks a lot dear...very glad.