MY LOVE

can't be read, can't be said, can't be expressed.

Something that can't be read,

Something that can't be said,

Something that can't be expressed,

And that's MY LOVE for you.

Reviews

[Elisa]

Short, sweet, and ringing with truth. Nice poem!
One thing I would change though: I would make lines 1-3 say, "Something that can't be read, 'Something that can't be said, Something that can't be expressed"
It's just a minor grammar thing, a very easy fix.
Anyway, Hooray for love poems! They're wonderful!

[Saddam]

Thank you so much dear friend for your attention and suggestion..... Definitely I'm going to change that. thanks again.

[brezybaby3]

Short and to the point i like that.

[Zanne]

Nice, short, and to the very true point. I like it :)

[Penny]

Simply beautiful. Sonetimes you just need these many words to say all you want. Excellent.

[Kamari's]

Very simple to the point I love it

[Saddam]

Thank you so much dear friend.

[Kamari's]

Anytime

[Kamari's]

Anytime :)

[RubyOmma]

simple and sweet. Could be for anyone. I like it. :)

[Saddam]

Thank you so much dear.........

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

Short, sweet and effective. Nicely penned. :)

[Saddam]

Thank you so much dear for your lovely appearance....

[♔ CrownedDevil ☾]

Your very welcome, SSADD! :)

[Neo]

I love that this is short and to the point! :)

[Saddam]

Thank you dear Neo...

[MomzillaNC]

Succinct and meaningful. I think the color bars work well in this short poem.

[Saddam]

Thank you so much......

[MomzillaNC]

yw :)

[Jeyanthi]

That's nice. But it shows your love. Is not it? :P

[Saddam]

Yes.......... Thank you so much dear friend for you visit.

[Jamestown]

Great piece of work, sometimes less is better!
These few words say what needs to be said...

[Saddam]

Thank you so much dear friend....