POEM ON CANVAS FOR YOU

Don't be mawkish with me

I'll sing for you a lilt

I limn you on my canvas

Though my lyric is limerick

Though my imagination is thick.

Author's Note

this is little piece of my new poem, please tell me your thought that it is able to be continue. thanks..

Reviews

[Josie E. Cook M. A.]

Intriguing~ Nice image too.

[CA Anurag Sharma]

want to read it more.... good work Saddam....:)

[Jeyanthi]

absolutely different...
ya... do continue..!

[For Who I Am]

great choice of words! The use was really great

[prajakta]

ohh..dis was so sweet!:-)simple n short,quite a good one!

[Mitali Shah]

Good one Saddam. Its short, sweet and innovative. :)

[Matching Socks]

Lyric is limerick,
Imagination is thick

I like that Saddam.

[AaronFreitas]

Nice one buddy! Like the creativity and that you confidently owned it! Great wording :)

[nazia]

good one... Liked it absolutely. You have great way with words :)

[Michael G. Smith]

I like this. Although some of the meanings are lost on me it has a snappy feel. Try "and" instead of though at the beginning of the last line?