A CONFESSION

THIS IS A CONFESSION OF A LOVE BETWEEN TWO GIRLS

OF COURSE I AM IN LOVE

THOUGH CONFUSION IS THERE FOR NOW

IT IS YOU OR YOUR FRIEND

I BADLY THINK ABOUT IT TILL THE DAY END

I LOVE YOU BUT CAN'T SHUNS HER TOO

SHE IS MY BREATH THOUGH HEART BEAT IS YOU

ABOUT EVERY DAY I FEEL A NAIL POIGNANT

I DON'T KNOW WHETHER IT IS RIGHT OR PORTENT

I LIKE YOUR SMILE, YOUR FRIEND'S EYES

THAT YOUR CATCHY BEAUTY MY HEART IS FLIES

I KNOW, IT IS OVER PERSUADE BUT LUCID

DON'T WANT BREAK YOUR FAITH WHICH YOU BUILD

I LEFT MY DECISION FOR YOU, BOTH 

IT IS MY VOICE AND IT IS THE TRUTH.

Reviews

[Sonam]

short and sweet sonnet....you have written it in a way that it expressed everything you wanted to say...

however, your situation seems funny to me. sorry if it hurts you but dear its definitely not love. you are attracted to both of them....nice confession although ;)

[Saddam]

that's why he is confessing...... If you will read my other poetry you can understand. I believe only true love which is beyond the words, you can say....Aankho ki bhasa....

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

Amazing poem, you expressed this very well. Your very talented.

Kaze~ :-)

[Costa Siwale]

this is an awesome piece, is it love and lust for two people respectively

[Ahena MK]

I LIKE YOUR SMILE, YOUR FRIEND'S EYES
THAT YOUR CATCHY BEAUTY MY HEART IS FLIES

really really good

[Hibiki]

The poem spoke to me about the problem
I like this
Great job~

[lissalovesyou]

What Sonam said. Short and sweet.
lissalovesyou:)

[star73]

right to the point always want to say what i feel about always afraid to tell how I really feel in sight of what it might be!! Nice write my friend thanks for sharing:)

[Rachelle]

Beyond the smiles and the beautiful eyes, attributes which fade in the course of time, look for character and compassion in the soul; conscience and competence in thoughts and actions; refinement and culture in manner; and a selflessness towards others and the community. Then, you would know….

[Avinash]

You are in deep trouble.....but poem is good :)

[Kasey Miriam]

a wonderful poem and a much better approach than what most people take

[Lorna]

Very beautiful and honest.