MOMENT OF BITTER-SWEETNESS

MOMENT OF BITTER-SWEETNESS

 

Moon light is gleaming

Soft wind is entwined with your hair;

Stars are blinking

Though your ear-rings are shinning as stars

 

So rendering existent it is

We had a fight with each other;

Both, we are looking through askance eyes

Enjoying this moment of sweet rancour

 

Filling night with glorious amenity

Infuriating me, you ring of bangles;

 Your smiles enthralling me warmly

And kisses allowing me to do didles.

By saddam husen

01/05/2015

©2015saddamhusen

Author's Note

All reviews welcome

Reviews

[Confuser]

Saddam: Love is bitter-sweet, what a great title and the poem is fun too. The visual of the moonlite breaking through her hair is nice, enticing, the earrings like the stars. Going through the lines of a silly fuss, that will soon be forgotten, and usually something to laugh about. Very sweet, romantic. I'm happy Sami, provided some help with grammar and wording, and he's correct, you do write with great pizazz...good imagery. Thanks so very much. Dale

[Saddam]

Thank you so much dale for your wonderful compliments.

[Confuser]

My pleasure.....Dale

[CA Anurag Sharma]

A very sweet poem... good work Saddam... thanks for sharing

[Saddam]

Thank you so much friend.

[prajakta]

sweet one..:-)and is it a your ring of bangles or you?

[Saddam]

Thank you dear for this lovely words, last one I did not get it, what thee mean?

[prajakta]

um..sorry dat was a mistake on my part.plz send more requests.love reading dem:-)

[Saddam]

No problem and don't be. Thank you and sure I'll send more of mine. I love your write too, send me too.

[Mitali Shah]

very nice Saddam Love makes you feel all the sweet and bitter moments. Captured very well

[Saddam]

Thank you so much dear...

[MsJewel]

Beautiful and bittersweet - moonlight and love go hand in hand. Gorgeous poetry my friend.
:) Julie

[Saddam]

Thanks dear for this lovely words.

[anne]

I liked it...beautiful Saddam..

[Saddam]

Thank you so much...

[nazia]

The bitter sweet moments in love are the most cherished ones... the definition of one of those moments here is amazing. its like, i am watching the moment passing by in reality.. great job :)

[Saddam]

Thank you so much dear. Its great to read your words. Thanks

[Sami Khalil]

"MOMENT OF BITTER-SWEET(ness)

Moon light is gleaming
Soft wind is entwine(d) with your hair;
Stars are blinking
Though your ear-rings are shinning as stars"

You write with great pizzazz...An excellent one...:).....................

[Saddam]

Thank you so much Sir for your help and your time.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome muchly...:).......

[AaronFreitas]

Awesome write my friend... beautiful words you wrote. Good work!

[Saddam]

Thank you so much dear friend.