M.

A dancing butterfly

with bullets at it's feet-

right in the face

of anger.

Stomped. Right there

with all the creepy

crawlies

tossed in hair.

Wriggled and giggled
in the contours
of your veins. Disease.
A worm spat
bottled blood
on your dads hankerchief. 

 

Right in the bullet,

dancing butterfly- move your f*****g feet.

Reviews

[Collect-Eye]

I doubt the 13th letter of the alphabet ever expressed emotions so intensely & eloquently before this poem was written.

I hate being sick.

[Sexy P3nguin]

Not a bad poem. A very strange one I might add. The title caught my eye. This is such a different piece I'm not sure what to say but I will try. There were a few lines I liked a lot, dancing butterfly- move your f*****g feet., that was a powerful line (probably because it uses the "f" word)And I liked it overall great job

[Charles D. Moorer]

I need dome help on this one. Tell me where you were going and what your intent was.