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it's funny how things turn out isn't? looks like things are falling in to place. and i like it.

I find this, 5 8 9
so divine
with your fleeting fingers,
so silver lined;
mercury-5 8 20
under a canopy of stars
makes me feel;
divine divine divine
and the cling
of your eyes
makes this feel so right.

Reviews

[Collect-Eye]

that is really beautiful..rhythmic and to the point as well. i can totally see someone reading this as spoken word to some good music

[Ourebro.]

What a breeze of entertaining wordplay.
Love the set up and everything else.
Great job.

[Ross Saunders]

This just sounds beautiful with the repeating sounds and the way you have it arranged. Very nicely done.

I'm quite fond of the rhythm.

eyes, eyes, eyes, they're the most brilliant things ever.