Illusion

The dewy eyes
Coerced me to
Alter between
The dazzling days
And the shadowy nights.

Is it solely between the
Illusion and illusionist
Or the Universe conspires?

Author's Note

Random scribble.
What are your interpretations?

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

No conspiracy by the universe. It is just there.It is not scheming, it is not planning. It's all in our brain and the pathways we wander down and the influences we come across in life. Whether dazzling days or shadowy nights, we are responsible in the main along with those who have influence over us. I wandered a little Saga.

Chris

[Meenakshi Dutta]

Thank you for your perspective Chris! I absolutely admire it. Yes, it's all related to us only. We just being part of the cosmos, playing our part like an artist.
May be, the universe doesn't interfere much, it's simply our flow of energy in this endless cosmos.
Regards,
S

[Chris Shaw]

You are welcome.:)

[emmajoygreen]

Unsure as ever am.. but.. we are each part of the push and shove of our place in space, on our planet and the way in which we live and those we know. Is said that each of us is part of every place we go, every person ever met, every thought or dream we've experienced or ever will. Such is our hoped-for place on this planet. Humility and honour is part of every rule book laid down.. without - we would never learn the truth. Perhaps? We live to learn, whether we learn enough is, maybe - what is so hard to find. Many,many thanks for sharing, Meenakshi Dutti.

[Meenakshi Dutta]

Thanku so much for the review! It’s been a while i stopped writing and today only i was again considering to scribble something fresh after years ! And the comment just reminded me , yes ! I have to start fresh
Thank you so much !!

[emmajoygreen]

Please, please write again, fresh and happy whatever the letters you lay! Time spent on the wing serves as a good guide to the nest!

[Bhuyanshi Talukdar]

Your poem is a profound exploration of the nature of reality and the human experience. The way you use language to describe the struggles of life is truly remarkable, and I found myself feeling uplifted and inspired after reading your poem. Your words are full of light and love, and I appreciate the way you offer hope and strength to those who may be going through tough times. I was particularly struck by the line "The dewy eyes coerced me to alter between the dazzling days and the shadowy nights" - it's such a powerful image that captures the way we can be pulled in different directions by our emotions and experiences.

[Meenakshi Dutta]

Thank you for wonderful review. Its been a while ! Took break from writing and here i m back now
read moreThank you for wonderful review. Its been a while ! Took break from writing and here i m back now
Thanks :)

[John the Baptist]

This is a love poem, I believe, but the theme can be expanded to include all of life. What is real and what is illusion? Possibly anything that changes is not fully real.

[Meenakshi Dutta]

Possibly! ! Sometimes it's hard to distinguish between whats real and whats illusion,
Best
S

[Betty Hermelee]

is life just an illusion or real? I don't think of conspiracy; You get to choose where you want to be in life; There is no magic; Sometimes a choice can feel like an illusion but you've really just captured happiness.
Nice write Saga
Best, Betty

[Orphic dreamer]

this is so beautiful. with such little words you have tried to incorporate the illusion of how the earth works, that's magic right there.

[Meenakshi Dutta]

Thank you dear orphic dreamer for stoping by! I appreciate your interpretation of it!
Bless ya:)

[Neville]

very simply .. quite brilliant my friend :)

[Meenakshi Dutta]

Thank you friend for visiting!
Bless ya:)

[John the Baptist]

Perhaps the dewy eyes represent the physical life, which causes us to dwell in polarity, the dazzling days vs the shadowy nights. Thus maya, the world, is the illusionist producing the illusion. The Universe never conspires because it is One, and thus beyond illusions.

[Meenakshi Dutta]

Wow., i absolutely admire your point of view sir.
That's what I personally interpret.
Ps: u seem to know lot of Hindi words, eg maya.

Blessings always.
S