You Don't Know Me

You don't know me

You don't know me at all

You don't know what I've been through

You don't know what I've seen

You call me horrible

You call me pathetic

You call me ignorant

You call me weak

You name me your babe

You name me your sweet

You name me your love

You name me your hun

You don't know me

You don't know me at all

You don't know my innermost thoughts

You dont know my life

You call me vermin

You call me a plague

You call me dirt

You call me disgusting

You say you love me

You say you want me back

You say you miss me

You say you won't forget

You don't know me

You don't know me at all

You say I changed for the worse

You don't see the effects of life.

 

Author's Note

This is the first part of a poem I am making at the moment. I will be putting the other part up soon. Be honest in your critiquing, like always please

Reviews

[StoryTailor]

It's pretty good. Kind of rough around the edges, but the writing overall is good.