Zehen se woh baatein

maine pucha zehen se,

He zehen, tujhe thi khabar

patah he tujhe ki karta tha ussey pyar

chahata tha pehena na ussey woh haar

thi woh meri bhag ki eklauti phool

thi woh meri samundar  thi woh mera pataal, mera swarg

wahi thi meri jwala wahi thi meri jal 

agar woh kehti tho todhdu ye ghar aur chhoddhu wo sehar jaha nahi ho uska zikhr

kyu nahi karsaka tu mere pyar ka izahaar

usne kaha,

tujhe bhi patah hey aur mujhe bhi,

woh thi teri samundra, but tu tha uski samundra ka bundh

thi teri bhag ki eklauti phool par tuh rehegaya uske bhag me todne apni dam,

Khudgarj kitna he ye jism, uske pyar ko kabhi nahi hone diya kam

Reviews

[Neha agrawal]

Yeh likha hua literally dil-phaad hai. Itna raw, honest aur intense emotion — lagta hai jaise kisi ne apne zehen ke andar ghus ke har unsuni baat ko lafzon mein daal diya ho.