How to Carve a Relationship

The most dangerous thing on this planet is a luscious woman with knife in her hand.

She stood there holding the bloody knife on her hand; a penetrating, focused gaze stared intensely at another piece of meat.

Thick crimson drops dripped onto the white marble after three deep cuts, but still she wasn’t done. Not in the slightest.

Confidently, forcefully, she elevated the sharp knife and while looking down, she moistened her lips and she slow and steadily descended the blade down towards the helpless, bare flesh.

Cut after cut after cut after cut. Carving, slashing, slicing the flesh away with the utmost delight. The satisfying look in her eyes was almost devil-like. Her wicked big green eyes filled with lust and gluttony stared intensely at the bloody display she had executed.

Gloating away, she let out a small joyful shriek.

Her voice rose with a sweet crescendo as she yelled out of the kitchen:
“Honey, the steaks are cut. Would you mind taking them to the barbecue outside?”

Author's Note

Please tell me what you think of it. Good or bad. Thanks very much!

Reviews

[Tamelia Jade]

Hahahaha... ah. I just sort of skimmed at the start and was like, "Oh, this is going to be gory," but then, it wasn't.
I enjoyed this greatly, it was a great story and I got into it straight away. I love how you described it because you do get a sense of pride when you've finally finished cutting that steak haha. I liked the line; "Her wicked big green eyes filled with lust and gluttony..." (Though I might have added a comma in there somewhere!)
Anyway, perfectly chilling story, thank-you!

[Imara]

Haha! Scared the crap out of me until that last line! Way to keep us in suspense and blinded to the truth. Awesome job!

[Relic]

Hahahaha Very clever. This is very good writing. I like it.

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amazing :-D

[Daydreamer54]

I liked it because I was tricked into thinking she was murdering someone, but that wassn't the case. Ypou did an exceelent job with detail and describing what was going on and making me think it was twisted. Great write!