One Day

One Day

A Poem by Aki
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Self motivation. Go figure.

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One day I'll figure it out
One day I promise not to pout

One day I'll prove you wrong
One day I'll stop singing this song
One day I'll disappear, never look back
One day I'll let you know where I'm at
One day I'll let go, stop depending on you
One day I'll be stronger, better and smooth
One day I'll be bigger, and hold no shame
One day I'll be faster, and better at the game
One day...One day...One day...
One day just seems so far away..

© 2008 Aki


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its a sad piece with the ending line, but the repetiveness adds to a smooth flow of honest current.

Posted 17 Years Ago

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Aki
Aki

Magic-Lolli-Land, CO



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My name is really no concern of anybody. My alias is Aki, as if you couldn't tell. I live in a magical place with other bodies and our native language is Bullshit. :) I'm eighteen years old and live .. more..