You Know?

Does she even know that I'm still alive?

It’s incomplete without you,

my existence and my soul,

this pain,

and these patterns I follow,

are incomplete without you.

You know?

I still walk on that seashore,

creates and leaves,

the castles of sand,

for the cruelty of sea,

You know?

I still lie on that coast,

see the sunset,

walks on those paths,
on which we walked,

I walk slow,

walk and walk,

visions of you,

runs in front of me,

till it gets darkest,

and then the moon comes up,

gets brighter and teases,

all those feelings and memories of you,

I wait and wait,

till I break again, once again,

All alone,

ah, you know? Still,

sun rises,

I wake up with your warmth,

warmth of your soul,

that lingers inside me still,

You know?

Time passed and passing,

I’m not dying,

I don't want to live,

unable to realize, trying to negotiate,

with you inside me,

I

I was nothing without you,

all here now,

ruined and soaked

You know..  .

its incomplete without you,

my existence,

these patterns I follow,

are incomplete,

without you.

You know..  . .

Author's Note

It was such a desperate write, it was getting hard for me to keep it inside and here I am with lots of lines, known as my poem, my feelings.

do let me know about it, feel free to express your views about it because I don't care about it anymore. :) or I have just got too numb.

Reviews

[Mi]

deep feelings..... you ain't express completely... complete it ... i want you to.... there is a lot more and i can sense that ... PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEASE?

[Maan]

The stream of pain won't stop if it starts to flow. Let it be, its enough to be a poem of a sort, else It'll turn into something I won't be able to explain. Neither to the person, nor and specially to myself. Thanks for the read. I appreciate your point of view and your concern to it.

[Mi]

ow..

[Pax]

sad and beautiful. enjoyed it.

[Arte]

I wish I have my laptop so I could write. This is a wonderful poem. Thanks for sharing.