You Came to Me

You came to me when you were more important than the beating heart.

Wonder,

how I survived,

I walked,

I fought,

When,

it was dark a dark path, 

a silent road, 

an empty me, 

a tasteless joke, 

a bad dream, 

an awful quote, 

when it wasn't me,

You came to me,

like dawn,

breaking iniquity, 

You came to me, 

when, 

a horrible sky, 

haunting thoughts, 

with shattered breaths, 

and shattered me, 

You came to me, 

in the desperate need, 

falling me, 

when, 

I was giving in, 

following an unknown circle, 

searching for a single drop,

of unknown thirst, 

that keeps me just, 

alive and awake, 

in sucked wounds,

 

You came to me, 

my last hope, 

my last resort, 

my trembled smile, 

like God's help, 

like cool breeze, 

like simple laugh, 

like a calm heart, 

like a deal for none, 

You came to me,

like everything, 

but something new,

Oh!

You wonder, 

how I survived, 

I broke, 

I stole every breath,

in search of you, 

You came to me, 

in the desperate need, 

You came to me.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Pax]

such emotions i felt it while reading this, there is some much in these poem that makes it very beautifully expressed.

[Eve]

I really enjoyed this one, and it sounds as if you are already experiencing the joy and pain, you'll probably have a zillion stepping stones before it is all over and you find the one to marry, sould you be of that mind, don't concern yourself overly much, what will be, will be XD